After reading other people’s introductions, I chose to comment on Aaron’s post. His post in particular and had a very different approach. These essays that we have to write about, revolve around art and Aaron’s introduction paragraph hasn’t mentioned the aspect of art yet, but he leads the reader into a thinking state and gets the reader wondering. Reading other introductions has definitely helped me since I have been struggling with where exactly I want to go with my essay. I could approach it in many different ways, I could ask a question to get the reader thinking or even approach my essay similar like Aaron’s, by not revealing my opinion right away. This idea allows the reader to be interested in finding out the meaning of the essay, by continuing to read.